update 3

I have finished my short film, since my last post I have added some scenes in which Michael goes into a dream, I have added some affects including a wavy effect to show that Michael is dreaming and an audio effect that is conventional when people dream.
I have also removed some unnessercary scenes such as overlooking boothferry park, and i removed the scenes of the two nurses, but instead kept the dialogue from the scene and overlapped it with the shot of Michael falling asleep.

update 2

I havent really got much further with the film, however it is nearly finished, because due to editing suites and other students accidentally over writing my work, meaning i had to capture and re edit all the clips i was using.